cecilxwhoaa

ok so i got in a writing mood last night, i know this sucks but i just wanna see what this rough draft sounds like. i kinda wrote it to be a song and i kinda got a melody down but heres the lyrics. i need all the criticism i can get guys.

You look ok from the outside.  But youre not fooling me.

 Inside your perfect little world everything is coming down.

Youre life isnt a fairytale. You arent liviing happily ever after.

Youre living the complete opposite.  Youre trapped.

Youre living like a robot. Doing every single thing  your told.

I don't know you anymore. All I can say is I told you so.

Your not the person I loved. Not the person I shared everything with.

Not anymore. Youre like a stranger to me.

All I have to hold onto is the memories  of what used to be.

This is all wrong. This is exactly how thhings shouldn't be.

Everything seemed picture perfect.

God was I wrong.

 I thought I was living in a faiirytale. It seemed to be your fairytale.

We were living happily ever after.

But it came crashing down.  (down, down, down.)